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There's a note on "you can record and preview before paying", but I wouldn't want to go through the trouble of recording and figure out at the last minute that the thing is way beyond my budget.
[edit: found the pricing on rollover, it's slow enough that it didn't show up the first time I clicked around. I would include it also on the book page]
Liked the design a lot, browsed through the books, opened one and got confused about what "recording" was supposed to mean. Flipped through the end of the book, and went to the FAQ, got even more confused by the webcam requirement. Then went back to the homepage and noticed the video. Played it and finally understood what the site is for.
Your "welcome" message should be changed to clearly state that you here to do a video recording of a bedtime story for a child when you're away.
* Picture of Phil with some unrelated stats.
* List of karts created by Phil, with the option to 'watch them all' (is that ever useful?)
* The list of books to read. Each entry has 8+ possible actions. The only useful visible info about each book is its title and a comment.
* Another unrelated list of 'most watched karts'.
* list of karts watched by Phil.
http://www.kartme.com/user/115/karts/47
I'm not sure new visitors would stay long enough to understand that page.
I would suggest you decide where the focus should be for each page and remove everything that is a distraction.
For instance,
* remove Phil's data from the left column (belongs to a profile page)
* remove the redundant title "Phil's Kart Books to read" from each entry in the list.
* remove or tone down the right column.
* show a summary extract for each book, show the price and option to track price (or automatically track price when 'karting')
* strip down possible actions for each entry to 3 or 4.
Old games are like legos, less sophistication = more imagination.
When I'm ready to reboot a machine or drop a table, I like to see 'DEV' on the hostname and not 'DB1'...
The second most important point in my opinion is reliability.
Once you get your first client, make sure to touch base regularly, keep them informed of the process and delays, ask questions and request feedback. If you do this (which really, is nothing but being professional) then you'll have an edge over most freelance graphic designers (in my own limited, but sad experience :)
What about starting with giving out the average response time and queue length when submitting a request? That'd be a good first step...
Why would your geographic location or the work habit of random strangers change who you are? What about taking some time off your bootstrapping startup until you can get on a healthier footing?
http://www.cnn.com/2009/WORLD/meast/06/10/israel.mattress.mo...
I'm sure he also enjoys sleeping without having to worry about server downtime :-)
Myst on the iTunes store: http://itunes.apple.com/WebObjects/MZStore.woa/wa/viewSoftwa...
Plus the bank can close or suspend the account whenever they want.
oh, and did anyone actually check that it's not a scam?
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/War_reparations#Europe http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Morgenthau_Plan
We use their iSCSI storage space for that, which is about 75c/GB (free server-to-server bandwidth). Their cloud storage appears to be even cheaper 25c/Gb
In the first dotcom crash, I worked for an incubator that had a similar approach: providing talents and services to 'idea people' while running our own project. It was a complete failure and closed in less than a year. Our own project failed to bring any revenue, and the other projects we started lacked any sort of commitment from the 'idea people'. We also had a short runway and an oversized team which prevented us from adapting to changing circumstances.
There are a couple things that makes me much more optimistic about Sproutbox chances. First, their team is much more talented that ours ever was. They could (and did) just build their own apps and be very successful.
Secondly, they focus on revenue-generating businesses. They may not start the next twitter or youtube, but that makes them much more likely to be around long enough to get your idea off to a good start.
"Offensive Material: Link contains offensive content such as references to religion, abortion, 911, and the devil."
"Link MAY contain", and 911 should be 9/11 (unless you're referring to the US emergency number)
[added link: http://isnsfw.com/yLyQTM]