But cool, virtually no bezels!
-31 karma · joined May 13, 2016
But cool, virtually no bezels!
What's wrong with that?
For example:
– Your navigation at the top is illegible. Theres very little contrast and it's hard to read. Make that more clear, higher contrast.
- Your main CTA ("Japanese candy surprises in your mailbox twice a month." [Email]) is also hard to read because of the orange and the custom font. Swap out the orange for a more vibrant color (maybe the orange color of the button) and use a nicer font that's easier to read.
- MAKE THE FONT SIZE BIGGER
- Add in some of the elements you added in the new design: When the next box is going out, etc.)
Your original design had an air of authenticity and honesty to it. The bought template seems like a copycat.
Keep (and improve!) the original!
Are we being trolled?
They could’ve done that years ago but they are not in the business of advertising. They sell hardware with complimentary services and ads are an accessory to that mission — not the mission itself.
This is necessary because its the only way to progress forward.