- The press release needs to be more customer focused. Can you justify "simplest"? Please add details about which specific AWS services can work with Lambda. Why are you mentioning Python and Ruby? Please remove 250ms.
- The customer quote should name a real person, not XXX. Where did the 1M number come from? Please add details to the Appendix. Cut part about "huge management and operational overhead". Please use specifics instead of "fast" and "reliable".
- FAQ #1: What is "stateless"? Please expand. Why is this different from other AWS services? Provide real numbers and examples.
- FAQ #2: This is unclear. What about other potential Lambda users? Provide real numbers and examples.
- FAQ #3: Everything below "handlers" is too specific, please merge with #4.
- "Developing and Deploying" section should be moved down. Security section should be first, as it's the priority.
- Overall, too much technical detail. Clean up and add to Appendix. Focus FAQ on customer needs, not implementation details.
- Etc.
Note that all of these comments will be contradicted by another manager in the following week's overview meeting.