It also includes portables with the home console generations and that’s not how people generally discuss portables.
It starts off at the 3rd generation of consoles (there’s a whole era of gaming that predates the “crash”).
And lastly it’s also very American specific (eg talking about “the crash” which was an American phenomena and didn’t affect Europe nor Japan).
In short, it’s a good start but it’s a looooong way off being in-depth.