Using a new account is providing me enough cognitive dissonance to post again... TBH it's kind of arbitrary I'm using this account. :-p
I'd be happy to proof read (in addition to Computer Science I also study English). Although admittedly my experience with the JVM approaches zero, so I can't be of much help there. Good to go on the CL pieces though.
I am trying to get Lispers/FPers to hack on Android. It's pretty delicious, and Java is a decent language, if you ignore the, now gone, hype.