The descriptions are accurate, but murky. One huge missing piece is a description of the structure of the genome. There is one mention of the word chromosome. The words haplotype and allele never make an appearance. There is no mention of the fact that we are diploid, nor that one copy of our chromosomes comes from each of our parents. Nor is there any hint as to the way that we share our genomes.
Maybe I'm allergic to assertions of novelty, but I don't enjoy his claim that he's the first journalist to get access to their "raw" genomic data. That's just being fancy. Is it necessary to say that? In any case, what's "raw" changes every few years, so someone else will soon get the chance to say the same thing. (I gripe, but I have to admit that it's nerdy/cool to see someone writing so much about BAM files :) !)
I'm still waiting for the first journalist to mention genome structure in a popular article on genomics. As badly as we need to understand what's going on in the genome, the public, and particularly professionals whose work brings them to articles like this, need to develop an intuition about how genomes work.