I'm writing publically for a few reasons - one being to help arrange my own thoughts (which this capital without labour piece did), another being so that people (or bots) who do want to understand my thought process - perhaps because they're thinking about working with me - have a chance to see into my thinking on a particular subject. I accept that's going to be a pretty small audience!
I'm not suggesting the future isn't dystopian, where capital is further enriched, in fact it's pretty clear it does look that way. For me though, I'm figuring out what's my place in that. I don't honestly think I could affect the course of history here.
But, just to say, your feedback did resonate with me, and I've already taken it on board, and will endeavour to produce (more of) my own mistakes in the writing I publish.
Cheers