willflagello

Hi guys! :)

I just wanted to share with you my experience about making a video for a startup. The average age of my team is 19 years old and we don't have a lot of money. We are working on Dayri (our startup) for passion and because we love doing it. But we really wanted to make something great, to stand out. So we thought about a video. Here is the result and how I made it.

Let me know if you have any criticism/suggestion/question. ;)

Thanks for the feedback. We'll find a solution. :)

You can find a little preview of its design here http://drbl.in/VdP

Okay, it's not much but what do you think?

As I said in another comment, we didn't want to say anything about Dayri.

I'll increase the speed for sure. Thank you guys. :)

Okay, but at least is something different. It's not just for getting to the form, we thought it would have been nicer than the other landing pages because you don't need a lot of time to get to the last "slide".

What do you think?

Thank you kerben. I already knew Ben The Bodyguard and it is fantastic, I love it.

Well, let's say that Dayri will let you write about your day in less than 2 minutes. And it won't be a private blog, it's a completely different concept. :)

I already knew OhLife but thanks for the feedback. Sadly that font, bolder, is a bit ugly.

Thank you for this precious feedback. I'll think about this. :)

You're right, it's better without "It's worth it". Your idea is nice and you're also right about the logo because if you see the page for the first time you don't understand what it is about. But this is part of the "I want to know more about it" effect, even if I agree with you that the logo should be visible. It's just that in the page as it is now I don't know where to place it.

Mmm... But with just 2 slides you don't understand much. It's also true that it already leaves you some questions because we didn't want to say almost anything about Dayri and how it works.

I don't understand the difference but "anywhere" is nicer, it sounds better. :)

Oh, well... That is fantastic. Many thanks for the feedback. :)

Thank you for the feedback, illdave. We hadn't tested it on an iPad yet. Thanks. :)

What do you mean exactly? Should I increase its speed?