setalp

Thanks. This is really helpful.

The overuse of "Self Hosting" is fair. Better H2 titles would have made it less frequent. Will be more thoughtful about this the next time.

The unique style and voice is where I am struggling with. Have always been instructed to write in a plain tone and simple English so that its easier to read through.

OP here.

Honestly, I got similar feedback when I got this reviewed internally. At this point I am not sure how to write so that it doesn't seem LLM generated.

Would be helpful if you could share why you thought this was LLM generated. The suggestions I have gotten so far has been to remove bullet points and sections - which I feel breaks readability.