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Manifestos of Future Leaders - Like You
Again, lots of potential here if you play your cards right.
Trust me on this one. Then resubmit to HN. There is massive potential here.
I'll write mine up in the next day or so. I may send you an email then with some user questions.
I'm going to forward this to my daughter) who is very ecologically conscious but overwhelmed at the immensity of the issue) as an excellent example of how they can make a positive change.
Thanks again.
A bunch of people are taking the vow already, and I'm excited and hoping it works for them and is the beginning of a more zen life. We'll see. I welcome everyone to try.
I wanted it to be attainable for everyone though, even novices with "monkey mind".
The only person that can "fail" you is your evaluator - the person YOU choose to help you keep your vow. Your evaluator must fill out an assessment after your 30 day vow which decides whether you get your refund.
EDIT: Bailing out early from the vow also makes a person ineligible for a refund. The VOW of NOW is for 30 days in a row, no less.
VOW of NOW was designed to have as few moving parts as possible. The focus is to meditate so to achieve greater peace and emotional stability. Besides, if you're worrying about money all the time, all the more reason to meditate.
Basically, the Zen Master provides an assessment form for your evaluator to fill out and sign.
The evaluator you choose is the one who decides at the end of the 30 day VOW of NOW whether you have achieved zen mind through diligent meditation practice - and get a refund (or not).
This system provides feedback from a trusted peer, as well as provides a money incentive (your own money).
If anything, this post confirms it.
Likewise, "worry-free" has the same negative effect. Instead, say "Express Service" or whatever.
One more thing, samples. Have a few samples or examples for people to see.
Overall, pretty good. That's my .02.
P.S. I wish you the best with this!
I actually can't give an opinion with so little information.
I want my 15 minutes back.
I think after a few iterations of this book, this should be a real money maker for you.
BTW, the language is a bit strong, and may distract from the message. I have two daughters in University but I won't buy your book for them until the language is toned down. There are probably others like me as well. Worth considering.
The key here is to make obtaining the gift as frictionless as possible. The recipient shouldn't need to create an account, fill out a captcha, verify their email, re-log back into the website, upload their profile pic ("wait, are you sure that's you? We don't see a face here"), pick 5 of their favorite books then stand on their head and spit wooden nickels.