This is great, but would be much more helpful as an annotated doc that explained why the various phrasings were chosen, as well as what was left out and why.
What's the best platform for that? It can't be Word comments...
What's the best platform for that? It can't be Word comments...
They already did a annotated SAFE: https://casetext.com/contract/simple-agreement-for-future-eq...
The annotations just for California law would be 10x the size of the document.
For lawyers interested in what a masterfully annotated computer program looks like, have a look at Donald Knuth's "literate programs". If you've a uni library nearby, have a peek at his Computers & Typesetting. It's gorgeous stuff. Great pictures, too!