https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/324756/PaperBox%20%20%20...
I think it might be a good idea if you could cut down the copy you have for the featurettes by about 1/3
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edit: also, if you can swing it, a quick video demo might be a nice alternative to swap out the image e.g. http://www.domo.com/company/what-is-domo and http://monanetwork.com/