Okay here's what I got- anybody landing on the page for the first time, assuming they have a thousand other tabs open, is just going to quickly skim through the post and read the header/title of each point. I did that. I nodded my head at each point. And then I left.

You might get some value out of putting a clear actionable point at the end of each segment, because I found myself leaving at the end without feeling like I had anything new or interesting to think about, or act on.