> I read it as "the crisis of our current economic structure is rooted in demographic trends".
I couldn't have realistically exaggerated their over-the-top way of putting the issue, so I simply quoted theirs.
> I wouldn't begrudge the author exploring just one possibility out of two, the one he believes to be more likely.
In an essay it's always best to address all the options, not just one, even if the author intends to discuss only one of them in depth.
Also, regardless of how we address or analyze the demographic issues, the only truly catastrophic outcome would be continued growth.
> Also, it would be better if you skipped the adhom ...
Not really an ad hominem. To a reader unfamiliar with the WSJ, it's simply context.