Nice. The book contains a bunch of good information that could already be found elsewhere but collecting it is quite practical. I highly suggest to read Kleppmann's Designing Data-Intensive Applications. The first edition was very good, a second one came out recently.

I was CTO of a FinTech where I built the whole software stack from scratch: the lessons in the book are mostly correct. I say mostly, because as always, there is a lot of "it depends" to take into consideration for your particular project. For example, I chose to not use event-sourcing to avoid the whole state computation issue. A standard append-only audit trail can do the job.

You can't guarantee exactly-once delivery but you can construct effectively-once processing, and that is what you really want.

Store every request and response : absolutely, and not only when consuming APIs, but when collecting any information from the outside world (and, if you can, also log every intermediate transformation step within your perimeter). Content-adressed buckets + a relational table are great for this.

The text also does not mention anything about data lineage. What happens if a vendor updates some data mid-day that you absolutely need to be aware of? You need to be able to account for that, while also re-playing computations that used the old values and get the same result. It's not a particularly hard problem to solve, but it takes some thought.