Although I agree with the sentiment in the article, it smells very LLM~y. Especially the sections and punchlines. Such as: `That is not a rounding error. That is a line item that needs its own budget code.`
Claude produces this kind of prose SO much. It's pretty annoying. I don't notice it happening on Gemini for the same prompts.
Punchy titles are also part of the marketing speak. Before Claude or ChatGPT, it would be a delicious read, understanding how they come up with the initial idea for an internal system. Since then, most of reads like "It's not just X, ..." every other paragraph, making it dull...
Nobody writes like this.
Every Time I See This Header
Followed By Another Header
I just know it's been LLMed xd also if you click around this page it's pretty obvious