I too thought about dithering while reading the article, but couldn't have imagined the result would be this much better. Thanks for sharing!
You might not thing that you'd notice that, but it looks surprisingly bad. Your eyes would immediately notice that there are "stripes" of solid gray instead of a smooth continuum. But if you apply dithering, your eyes won't be able to notice (at least not easily). It will all look smooth again.
In a situation like this, I like to use "blue noise" dithering, but there are scores of dithering methods to choose from.