(for all its flaws) that's just how you structure a design presentation.
Maybe usability studies, A/B test results and if at all possible some form of prototype, even if it is just static.
Plus the article lacks consideration for mobile and small screen platform (i.e. considering edge cases). In fact I'd go as far as to say it actively disregards them by choosing gigantic fonts and lots of useless whitespace in favor of useful content.