0 comments and 23 points? What's up with this? This seems like very compelling content to me.
Very compelling content, everyone knows here isn't the place to talk about it. You have to keep in mind, YC points to HN as the place to go show off for PG. It literally says that on the how to apply page. Even if you're not here to suck up, you can be shadow-banned for being too critical of YC or the startups they've funded.
edit: And thats just for me as a guy who doesn't post under a name connected to me or my online identity in any way. People for whom their comments can follow them around have even more reason to bite their tongue.
Wait a week, resubmit it with a different one.
There's also the time needed for the article to bump its way up to the home page.