Did anyone manage to read the whole essay? I often notice with text like these, that they try to imitate scientific writing, but never quite manage (they always end in some kind of uncanny valley). The author states his premise quite nicely in the abstract, but the article does not really provide a consise supporting argument and instead just makes semi related points. This is another pattern I noticed, layman authors often seem to think that dumping lots of loosely related "evidence" somehow strengthens the argument.

I wonder if there are good resources which would help lay scientists to write good articles (maybe an opportunity for an LLM proofreader?)