The first example of a good refactor is a meh refactor at best, and possibly a bad refactor. Array methods such as map or filter are not "more conventional" in javascript; they are "as conventional" as for-loops, and arguably less "conventional", given how for-loops have been around since the introduction of the language. They are also inevitably more expensive than for-loops (every cycle creates an anonymous function; a map followed by a filter means another iteration of the array). The original example was fine; there was no need to "refactor" it.