Ex - you say this:
> Hospital computers should not be connected to the internet.
But then you immediately jump onwards, as though what you've said is obvious common sense - but I don't think it is.
Can you explain to me why you believe hospital computers shouldn't be connected to the internet, and then discuss and weigh the downsides of NOT connecting them?
Because there I think that comment exposes the exact mindset that the author was discussing... no obvious appreciation or understanding of the situation, just an ill-informed off-the-cuff remark.
Can you tell me how you plan to implement cross facility dosage tracking for patients?
Can you let me know how you're going to send CT scans or x-rays to correct expert?
Can you tell me how that patient's records are going to be updated, how billing is going to be generated, or how their personal doctor is going to be notified of their condition?
I can think of a LOT of reasons that hospital computers really should be connected to a network. Maybe not every computer, maybe not every network, but even that distinction appears to be far beyond the thought you put into it before immediately saying "Hospital computers should be connected to the internet".
You're basically making the author's point for him here.