Ted Chiang has won the PEN/Faulkner Foundation's short story prize
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Since all of Chiang's stories are short stories or novellas, they've very approachable. You're not committing to a full novel, you can easily read these stories in a single sitting.
Ted Chiang is one of my favorite writers. I don't think I've read a single story of his that I didn't find interesting, and a lot of the ideas raise profound deeply engaging questions.
I shared this with a friend who grew up native in an Arabic-speaking country. After finishing it, he said he'd like to read it again but in the original Arabic. He'd interpreted it as authentic from his native storytelling culture.
Such an amazing writer.
Highlights for me from Exhalation:
The Merchant and the Alchemist's Gate - beautifully written story in the style of Arabic literature
The Lifecycle of Software Objects - resonated strongly with me due to its criticism of the software industry, and raises great ethical questions about AIs
The Truth of Fact, the Truth of Feeling - I was intrigued by the Tiv tribe's concepts of truth, and blown away when I later found out that "mimi" and "vough" are real concepts and not Chiang's imagination
Anxiety Is the Dizziness of Freedom - a great and plausibly seeming examination of the psychological and social effects of communicating with alternate realities
It makes me want a time machine just to go back and share it just to see the reaction.
I think it depends on what you mean. It takes the literal plot in a different direction—I think necessarily, because it'd be very hard to convey on film the important parts of the story without something like very heavy-handed voice-over. But I could go for the argument that it is true to the spirit and mood of the story. (Personally, I enjoyed it—it's by far my favorite Villeneuve's movies—and, as a huge Ted Chiang fan, I didn't feel cheated, but neither did I feel that I'd seen a very faithful adaptation.)
I did love a lot the short story, and kind of got mad at "Arrival" for some of the changes it makes to the story. But. After several (SEVERAL) re watches of the movie, I got to "understand" what Villeneuve was about, and I fell in love with the movie as well.
It currently sits in probably my top 5 preferred movies to re watch (Being the others both Blade Runners, About Time & Notting Hill in no preferred order)
Dune 2 to me shows that even with an amazingly talented adapter/director, that there are some limits to what can be conveyed from literature to film.
The limit in Dune 2 comes down to the fact that much of the “action” in the novel takes place via internal monologue. To convey that in film ends up being very, very hard and with Dune you can’t escape it.
In my viewing of Dune 2 I thought they weren’t able to really show the vastness of Paul’s internal journey, his visions of Jihad, struggling with his place in the universe as his mind is transforming. I didn’t feel that was in the film and made a lot of other actions and motivations more confusing.
I’m glad we have so many ways to tell stories, and I’m wholeheartedly for adaptations, but the fact that some types of ideas and stories are best expressed via one medium over another is something to embrace as well.
There's a really good interview of the changes he made, how the script came to be, and how he got Villenueve on board: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WDXlaa9JpuI
The anecdote about the most important line in the film is also really funny in that the line seems so deep and philosophical, but it came about almost entirely through improvisation at the last minute.
The whole thing is one of those rare cases where I consider the original story by Ted Chiang, the script by Eric Heisserer, and the film by Denis Villeneuve to all be complimentary.
Note the usage of quotes from Nabokov's Pale Fire during the baseline test. A few I liked:
Do you feel that there's a part of you that's missing? Interlinked.
Did you buy a present for the person you love? Within cells interlinked.
* spoiler alert *Joe (aka "K") has to pass the baseline test to demonstrate his lack of emotional state.
There's a scene early on in the film where K will be giving a present to his hologram love, Joi. She's the opposite of K - full of emotion, joy, sadness. Joe just had a rough day, comes home, and she tries to cheer him up
Joi : Would you read to me?
[gets up, crosses to table, 'picks up' Nabokov's Pale Fire]
Joi : It'll make you feel better.
'K' : You hate that book.
Yes, of course she hates that book. She is a glowing ball of emotion and doesn't want to ever give that up. She's the most emotional character in the whole film.It's clear the film is a true labor of love from Hampton Fancher and Michael Green. They put their entire being into this work.
Previous discussions on this: https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=37963935
Not sure if this [1] is the post I read back in the day, so I hope it does explain the story correctly (Haven't read this one in particular, just googled for it). Then I thought "May be I picked that from Hacker news" [2] and [3] (May be you should go at these in reverse order)
[1] https://cohost.org/mcc/post/178201-the-baseline-scene [2] https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=35813595 [3] https://www.denofgeek.com/movies/blade-runner-2049-how-a-key...
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To be clear, I quite like Arrival. I just think its message is quite different from the short story.
In the short story she sees all of her life "simultaneously" but it all still works with our typical notions of causality. The future can't influence the past, and so she can't use knowledge of the future in the present.
In the movie, she gets glimpses of the future which she then uses in the present. She learns the Chinese general's phone number from a memory of the future and then calls him. In the movie it wouldn't have made sense for her to see her daughter die in an accident and then not act on that information at all, so they changed it to an illness which she couldn't prevent even with foreknowledge.
Didn't she do something like this in the short story as well? The part where she learns the non-zero-sum phrase?
> In the movie it wouldn't have made sense for her to see her daughter die in an accident and then not act on that information at all
It didn't make sense in the story either. I remember being infuriated.
> and on my first read, I thought [Story of My Life] was downright mediocre—it seemed like some formal experimentation ... wrapped around an unnecessarily confusing plot & second-rate physics mumbo-jumbo in the service of a heavy-handed point. On my second read years later, having read some more about related topics in physics & philosophy since, I realized that I (along with almost everyone else who read it, judging from online discussions & reviews of the story and Arrival) might have been badly mistaken and that the plot was deliberately open to misreading and the physics mumbo-jumbo was in fact the whole point and the formal structure nicely reflected that.
> Didn't she do something like this in the short story as well? The part where she learns the non-zero-sum phrase?
If you carefully read the section, she learns the "non-zero-sum" phrase before having her daughter. The flashforward where she uses the "non-zero-sum" phrase is just her recalling the memory - no precognition required.
> “Mom, what do you call it when both sides can win?” I’ll look up from my computer and the paper I’ll be writing. “What, you mean a win-win situation?” … “I’m sorry, I don’t know it either. Why don’t you call your dad?”…A representative from the State Department named Hossner had the job of briefing the U.S scientists on our agenda with the heptapods. We sat in the video-conference room, listening to him lecture…“You mean it’s a non-zero-sum game?” Gary said in mock incredulity. “Oh my gosh.”…“A non-zero-sum game.” “What?” You’ll reverse course, heading back from your bedroom. “When both sides can win: I just remembered, it’s called a non-zero-sum game”
There are two views of the world, in one you have freewill and experience making choices. In the other, you have no free will, and the things you do are set. They are set and you know what they are.
That's why its important that her daughter died of something preventable, so when you find out at the end that it hasn't happen yet, yet she does nothing to stop it even though it is in the future, you are getting a taste of seeing the world in this second way.
Cancer, there is nothing anyone can do, and it throws aside the whole premise.
The acting on seeing things in the future break the premise as well.
The point of the story was that you can't act on the future. If you can see the future you can't change it. It's also why the aliens had no strong reason for coming or leaving. They were always going to come, have the explosion and leave.
If you like Borges, Clarke, Stephenson and others you will love Mr. Chiang. Some of his writing is the best I've read in creative fiction in any genre.
Egan has some books that fall into an (afaik) completely unique sub-genre that I have heard described as "math-fi".
Some of his books are (credibly) described as a textbook wrapped in a narrative veneer. E.g. he has 3 books set in a universe with a ++++ metric tensor, and another book set in a ++-- universe. He painstakingly rederives many details of physics, chemistry, etc. to a level of detail that I've never seen even in physics textbooks, and then creates a story where characters in that universe discover its properties. The books are good even without paying too much attention to the math, but if you find that part interesting, he has detailed supplemental materials on his website.
(And this isn't boring shit like "this world is four-dimensional, so its inhabitants need more legs, woah!", this is bizarre shit like "better clear the road so that we can rotate the museum down it, before the sun moves on".)
Reading these really helped my intuitive grasp of relativistic mechanics.
Incandescence is also cool but (minimal spoilers) is more or less the normal +--- metric. Not nearly as mind-bending as ++++ or ++--.
I guess I'm saying he's not Philip K Dick or Stanislaw Lem, or even William Gibson, but he's awarded/discussed as much.
I will, of course, buy his next book, short or long-form. But I'd love it if he went a little higher/deeper conceptually. I think he has it in him.
The second is that I think most of Lifecycle has been said before, and possibly better, and sometimes has been said for decades. I don’t mind a short story with a single new idea, but Lifecycle is verging on novella, and I think it didn’t need to be nearly so long, or put another way, the length wasn’t used to get the depth in to the story I’d like to see for the page count.
The main Lifecycle story points: can software be human/a person? If so, does it need to be raised/cared for? What will the people who do that think about it? Is that a dead end in AGI? If software agents get autonomy, will some of them willingly be sex robots? Is that really that different than humans grinding in software jobs?
I mean, okay, those are all super reasonable things to write about, and not uninteresting, but PKD famously hit up these questions of personhood in the 60s, as did Lem - PKD with weirdo psychoanalysis dystopia settings, Lem with lighthearted stories about competing constructors.
I guess I didn’t find it that dismally cynical about software either, but I may be jaded ;)
I stopped reading them after a while, because it felt like eating a box of assorted donuts. Very creative/stimulating but too many idea changes, too short and too quick.
I really find novels more compelling compared to short stories. They seem to have more depth, explore more adjacent things, allow for character development, take the time.
In fact, nowadays from time to time I go too much the other way. I quit at book 7 of the 20 book series because there're not enough new ideas/momentum.
https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/SeinfeldIsUnfunn...
If any part of your imagination is like the experience of seeing, you probably don’t have it.
“And God sent him to Hell anyway.”
I wonder if that in itself made his works higher quality: no pressure for high word count, and thus economy with words and no filler content.
Economy with words and filler content might differentiate a good from a bad novel, but not a novel and short story.
Which novels would you recommend that had no filler content?
"The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy"
Because from how I understand it I'd argue there is no such thing as "filler content" in novels.
Sometimes going on talking about minor characters routine is kind of the main point of an author’s intention, but it may read as “filler” by some.
Or something like Brandon Sanderson books, where his fans enjoy spending more time in that universe, but make their novels very long.
His short stories are amazing and right to the point, but most of his novels are filler and would probably work better as short stories. In novels King has to answer questions he can skip in short fiction which is why his novels always end so unsatisfactory ('it was aliens all along!').
1. The merchant at the alchemist's gate. 2. What's Expected of us 3. Exhalation
[1] https://www.npr.org/2024/04/23/1246578813/pen-america-cancel...
> But the event was canceled when nearly half of the writers and translators nominated withdrew their books from consideration. The awards will still be granted to those who did not withdraw.
For context, I agree with the basic philosophical premise. I'm a Jew, but Israel is a repressive apartheid state, and while it had a right to defend itself, it's approach in Gaza absolutely meets the internationally accepted definition of genocide. The positions of individual Jews and Israelis are on a wide spectrum, but it's also not controversial to say that as far as the current Israeli leadership, this genocide is not an accident, not even from a lack of care. It is absolutely within their goals and desires to have all Palestenians eliminated from the territory administrated by Israel, and they're going as far as they can without losing the international support of the United States.
With all of that said, I have no idea what PEN has to do with this. If they are endorsing it, they should stop. If they're funding it, they should stop. If they're invested in organizations directly supporting the Israeli government, they should stop.
But if all they are is "an organization in the US", then their tax dollars are going to fund the genocide. And every single American taxpayer is equally complicit here, which is to say not at all. People SHOULD be fighting for change, and advocating for it. But not through empty speeches or statements. Statements from PEN do not protect or save the rights of Palestinians.
I also think this is meaningfully different from the BLM era when protestors stated that silence is violence, and a lack of a statement is a tacit rejection of the movement. BLM was/is about an inherently American problem of systemic racism. White Americans benefit from systemic racism through no action of their own, so acknowledging it and at least making an effort to get woke to it (the original meaning of the term) is at least a necessary step to choosing to helping to dismantle it. American Corporations do play a part in that.
But on Israel/Palestine, I just think these moves do not help the cause.
[0] https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VEF-Hrg8wN7WHiSljqwd9IqH...
One of the major things that pushed things over the edge for writers affiliated with PEN is they were platforming Mayim Bialik [1]. They're an organization founded around free speech and protecting writers and they hadn't made any statements about the journalists killed in Gaza. For an organization that is often virtue signaling for (progressive) political causes their silence was pretty loud for many writers that interact with them as literary community members. They had even canceled events that featured stories of Palestinians due to not wanting to stir controversy. And then they go and platform Bialik and I think a lot of people just turned on them in frustration at that point.
[1] https://lithub.com/two-novelists-have-cut-ties-with-pen-over...
Possibly my favorite is the last story in the “Story of Your Life” collection, “Liking What You See: A Documentary” (I think I got the title right). It’s about a controversy on a college campus where the administration is getting ready to make a rule requiring that students use a technology that blocks their perception of beauty in humans. It’s not even a real technology, but the way he shows all sides of the issue - showing that it’s a lot more complicated than it looks at first glance - it feels REAL. Amazing author.
Short stories are such a fantastic and frustrating format, because the best ones blow your mind and leave you wanting another thousand pages.
Chiang's stories are good SF stories in this vein -- even the stories with magic. He considers the consequences of his What-If hypotheticals in depth, whether they are plausible according to known physics or operate on fantasy suppositions.
Consider his story [1] "Liking What You See: A Documentary." It's about a world in which people can have their perceptions of human beauty suppressed as an anti-discrimination measure. In some authors' voices this would be a strident sermon about a dystopian Equality Gone Too Far, or in others, about the new Utopia that arises when people are judged on their actions instead of their appearance. But Chiang doesn't preach to any choir. He plausibly represents how people would react to this hypothetical technological development without putting his thumb on the scale to tell readers how to feel about it.
Most ideas are not as clearly bad as the Torment Nexus [2], nor as clearly beneficial as the polio vaccine. I love that Chiang can write about ideas that might as well be a pitch for a Black Mirror episode but with much more consideration than Black Mirror would treat it. His slow writing pace probably helps too.
[1] https://waldyrious.neocities.org/ted_chiang/liking-what-you-...
I'd also recommend short stories by Kafka. Not just his most famous ones like Metamorphosis (which is fairly long), but his very short stories are quite intense and have a similar sort of "weight".
If my only options are "consent" or manually going down a very long list unchecking everything, and don't forget to click on the little "vendors" link because there's an even longer list in there too... Then I give up.
This isnt even compliant (you have to offer a way to reject easily). I don't know why they even bother; it's already illegal, and is just annoying.
Bye!
My solution is simply to open every website (that I don't specifically want to be logged-in to) in incognito mode, accept all cookies, and close all the windows when I'm done.
It reminded me of Naval Ravikant idea, except Ravikant was talking about money and Chiang wasn't:
"In 1,000 parallel universes, you want to be wealthy in 999 of them. You don’t want to be wealthy in the 50 of them where you got lucky. We want to factor luck out of it." (https://nav.al/rich)
[1] https://en.m.wiktionary.org/wiki/Everett-Wheeler_telephone