I find this type of writing tiring to be honest.
The subject is interesting enough but I feel like I’m trying to find a recipe in one of those cooking sites also acting as chef’s diary.
The subject is interesting enough but I feel like I’m trying to find a recipe in one of those cooking sites also acting as chef’s diary.
That's almost certainly not what happened in the room but is the author blurring his almost literary account with reality. It's a very common almost manipulative style in newer journalism when writers want to contrast their emotional state vs an allegedly harsh reality.
I see where you're coming from and perhaps what I meant is something closer to 'build things up rather than tear them down'. You've got two conflicting opinions. Theirs and mine. Inquire inside the article to see which of us is a worthy recommender of casual content to consume on the internet