I have noticed that most HN discussions on math topics seem to devolve into complaints about notation. There seems to be a fairly large contingent of people from the programming side of things who don't have a formal background in mathematics.
I get the feeling that it isn't just frustration from a lack of understanding. If the topic was from some other technical field like organic chemistry or medicine I don't think you'd see this kind of response. I believe where the frustration comes from is adjacency: people have an expectation that they ought to be able to understand it because programming (via computer science) is adjacent to math. This expectation combined with a lack of understanding is what leads to cognitive dissonance. And that cognitive dissonance is what leads to the complaints about notation.
The notation isn't the problem. Every field has its own notation, jargon, and conventions. Mathematics notation is very simple and terse but the underlying concepts can be very abstract. Understanding comes from a lot of mathematical practice, not a glossary of terms. To paraphrase Euclid: "there is no royal road to mathematics (geometry)."
That said, there’s a lot of poorly written theory publications out there in my opinion. A big sin to me is that a lot of them will do stuff without explaining in simple English beforehand how they’re going to do it, why they’re doing it, and why it is important. The first item you can get if you’re going through the math line by line at least, but that can be arduous and often I want to understand the big picture before I dig into the details. It doesn’t take much — just a couple of sentences before or after the result can go a long way.
I don't fault theoreticians for not using simple English. In many cases you're dealing with objects that are built upon a tower of abstractions with which you and your colleagues are already intimately familiar. This is true in any technical field. Sit in a hospital cafeteria long enough and I'm sure you can overhear surgeons talking shop over lunch. I wouldn't expect them to use simple English either. They have a huge corpus of terminology for every muscle, tendon, ligament, and bone in the body. Skipping past the simple English allows them to be brief and fluid in their communication style, at the expense of leaving laypeople out of the loop.
This book is just over two months old... Are you saying _you_ did this since Oct 31?