Here's lyrically one of my favourites from the album: https://genius.com/Built-to-spill-randy-described-eternity-l...
Here's lyrically one of my favourites from the album: https://genius.com/Built-to-spill-randy-described-eternity-l...
That said, in your song, as remarkable as the first verse is (and it’s a great tune), the second verse is too close to pop tropes for me. FWIW, my favourite popular-music lyricist is Scott Walker, who I feel is fully a match for the 20th-century poets I enjoy, e.g. [0] [1]. Would love to find other similar lyricists.
[0] https://genius.com/Scott-walker-sunn-o-herod-2014-lyrics
I will say if 'pop' music has failed you, and you're largely into instrumental music, I can't recommend Dead can Dance enough. Specifically Serpent's egg if you never listened to them. They're largely 'instrumental'(the singer made up her own language). The only song with defining lyrics on the album I also think are super beautiful: