This is a good message to get out, and I wish it were more likely to make it into the hands of people who wouldn't otherwise get the message. I applaud the effort.

I'm disappointed with a few things about it, though, because:

- It makes it sound like Scott McCloud did this, but he didn't

- It unfortunately includes a political viewpoint that is irrelevant to the message

- It omits context on a few points to make them sound worse than they are, which is completely unnecessary, because the message is devastating without them

When you're speaking truth about a powerful and deceptive entity, you have to be absolutely factual and focused, and this isn't quite there.