Thanks for the feedback. I will simplify it further!
There is no need to make it any more complex than "facebook, the company, messed up, now their properties are broken". An overly elaborated analogy just makes you sound condescending.
He's trying to explain the knock-on effect on other websites. I don't see how this is at all condescending.
don't think the parents (target audience) would think he sounds condescending.
Just use the industry standard car analogy instead :-)