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i don't know but for me it looks to color full and not structured properly

I'm not very good at building landing pages I guess I just suck at this even I put a huge amount of effort into this one.

I should probably just pay someone to do a a landing page for me or use the template or something.

go with template that is what did with https://blurweb.app

Nice. Looks great! What template did you use?