I guess this site is trying to sell Julia a bit, by showing how close it looks to mathematical pseudo-code.
tl;dr: COBOL won.
In this case, if the developers involved are assumed to know the math already, concise is probably for the good. If you are trying to teach the algorithms to a mathematically unsophisticated audience, it's a different story.
If I'm describing the same concept to a) a group of undergrad students, b) a group of mathematicians and grad students c) a group of software developers or d) a room full of execs - I'm going to do it differently in each case, including notation and emphasis.
The other part is that it was never intended for programmers at all; it was for the ‘vice-president or a colonel or admiral’ who wanted the illusion of being able to understand their underlings' work. I think it's unfortunate that it took over general-purpose computing during the dot-com boom; prolixity engenders clarity about as much in code as in human language.
Julia's target audience isn't "business" or "business people", although there's no reason you couldn't use it for that purpose.
It's the famous "write-only" problem of the Perl language, which uses symbols heavily too.