Criticism pales in comparison to the level of anger the public felt. Outrage is a better description.
The other parts of the quote, such as the location, or age of entry into the club (which as a former DJ, I know are meaningless, just about everywhere) are irresponsible and irrelevant.
You’re taking the responsibility off of Akon, and putting it on the victim, or the club in some random country.
Added the music video: It has clips of the outrage on the news and the girls age. https://youtu.be/ynMk2EwRi4Q