I've never really given microcopy thought... I probably need to look into that. I'm actually really struggling with copy and messaging right now on https://qvault.io. If anyone on here takes a peek at the landing page I would love to hear feedback!
Here's some feedback:
- It wasn't clear to me what your company does after reading your home page.
- When I saw the "Courses" section it clicked. But I only read that far because you asked for feedback.
- You should lead with what you do or what benefit the customer will receive.
- For example, the main title on your home page should be something like "Learn computer science by playing games" or "Fun, self-guided computer science courses"
I would highly recommend https://copyhackers.com/.