Small Copy, Big Impact
steamclock.com
steamclock.com
"Are there features or actions that are underused because their worded in a non-obvious or unappealing way?"
"their" should clearly be "they're". I mean, a post promoting precise "microcopy" should at least get the basics right, I think.
Here's some feedback:
- It wasn't clear to me what your company does after reading your home page.
- When I saw the "Courses" section it clicked. But I only read that far because you asked for feedback.
- You should lead with what you do or what benefit the customer will receive.
- For example, the main title on your home page should be something like "Learn computer science by playing games" or "Fun, self-guided computer science courses"
I would highly recommend https://copyhackers.com/.
I think they should fix the development processes before the copy strategy.