> Today’s event contained a whole ton of new official announcement, but also lacked (in typical Apple fashion) in detail.
"any detail" is probably what they meant
> This packaging style with DRAM embedded within the organic packaging is something that isn’t inherent new to the new M1 chip as we’ve already seen such a design featured on the A12X.
s/inherent/inherently
> We can see the new M1’s four Firestorm CPU cores on the left side. Notice the extremely large amount of cache – this was one of the surprises reveals of the event as the A14 still only features 8MB of L2 cache.
"this was one of the surprises reveals" not sure what they were going for, probably just remove "reveals" and it works?
Also they talk about the A14 in the title but then barely touch on it at all. It's like 3 sentences about it then a recap of Apple's last transition.
EDIT: I now see that there are multiple pages. I really don't like it when webpages do this and I like it even less when it's not clear at all that there are multiple pages. The title for the next "section" is 20px tall and not clear that it's a link to go to the next section (No "Next", arrow, etc) and the dropdown for switching between pages (this has got to be the worst way to do pagination IMHO) is 16px tall...