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An 11+ minute demo video? IMO it's a tad long, should be between 1-3 mins.

Also, perhaps the screenshots need captions explaining what they are? E.g. what's with the one of the faded out garden and the highlighted flower bush. I don't get its significance or what it is trying to show.

Then again I'm not your target market. Otherwise nice work.

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That was my first recorded video and I preformed badly. Also it needs to be updated since the product has changed a lot from that version. The same for the photos. Thanks for remembering me of them :)

Looks pretty cool. Also agree with the video comment, I think you could cut it by at least half. With almost any video editing program you can add a voice-over track, that way you can retry as much as you want if you mess up.

Also wouldn't hurt to cut out the parts of the video where your internet dies, if not for time at least to make it seem more professional.

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