Perhaps the "How" should be added back in?
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Edit: The title has been changed. Originally, it was "NASA and ISRO discovered water on the Moon".
Perhaps the "How" should be added back in?
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Edit: The title has been changed. Originally, it was "NASA and ISRO discovered water on the Moon".
Edit: when I posted this the title was "NASA and ISRO discovered water on the Moon"
i.e. "Apple quietly drops case against X" => "Apple drops case against X"
However, I do think "quietly" provides extra context - it indicates Apple (in this fictitious scenario) did not issue an official statement on what they did or why; a 3rd party just happened to notice by reviewing public legal documents.
The whole question of what is or is not news necessarily takes a certain perspective, though, so I guess this is always going to be a gray area.
In one case, it's an article about an amazing new discovery, in another case it's an explanation about the method of something we already know.