Criticizing how white men use their whiteness to preserve their exclusive access to money and power isn't racist
> Criticizing how Jewish men use their Jewishness to preserve their exclusive access to money and power isn't racist
If the sentence sounds bad, and that most certainly does, then the original is racist.
Yours is a bizarre liberal conception of racism that totally ignores historical and material context, where you can just replace words in a sentence to prove it's racist. If you replace the word white in that sentence with another race, it has a totally different meaning, because the context is totally different.
White men DO have disproportionate access to money and power in the US, are you disputing that?