Related: I've found advice on this video to be very useful in terms of some actionable feedback that can be incorporated in your writing: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vtIzMaLkCaM
People only read things if they find value in what you have written - they are less likely to pay attention if the article is written in a way that best demonstrates how much you (the writer) know about something. And, showing readers that their understanding might have some gaps is a good way to sustain their interest.