Even the TL;DR didn't explain what I was looking at. Please fix before you've burned your one chance at a first impression.
Maybe 3 points about how to solve the issue you are raising ?
Bonus points if you can describe the benefits of your offerings without making me read a manifesto.
Best of luck!
I've tried to make it clear by appending a summary at the top of the blog post and a big visual banner at the start of the offering (to catch the eyes of those who will speed scroll). But apparently it's not enough. I'll try to fix it.
Thank you for the honest feedback.
Please take a look at the 2 following videos: https://kerkour.fr/blog/the-just-cause-and-the-infinite-game...
To understand the structure of the article.
This article is not intended to everyone, it's intended to those who believe what we believe. The early adopters, the potential contributors.