I don't mind non-standard grammar; the problem is that I found it difficult to understand.
Breaking rules _for the sake of breaking them_ is extremely childish.
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"Rebellion is almost as stupid as obedience. In either case you let yourself be defined by what they tell you to do. The best plan, I think, is to step onto an orthogonal vector. Don't just do what they tell you, and don't just refuse to."