I'm assuming this is a fake interview to show off the interview feedback for your platform? If so, I think it looks great and is a huge part of what's missing from the current "standard" engineer interview. Receiving feedback like this would be incredibly helpful in figuring out what I'd need to work on to pass technical screens.

The fact that there's very little proven correlation between being able to jump through these hoops and being a good programmer is another story altogether, but I like this!