No offense, but you need to read and write a lot more. I know that your post is not the most important writing in the world, but there are many poorly constructed sentences, misspelled words, completely missing words, etc.

It makes a huge difference in how people perceive you and it's also reflected in your speech patterns and your speaking ability. This in turns affects how people perceive you face to face. Poor verbal communication can make even the best resume useless.