Thoughts on email: Your whole email is about you. The first paragraph is about you and what you want from the prospect.

Then you tell them about getting something for free without actually knowing whether "FREE" actually matters to them or not.

You then tell them you'll do a smooth integration, which is also about you.

Then you ask them to help you.

Then you ask them to educate you.

Then you ask them to introduce you to their contacts.

Then you close with a non-close and thank them for reading it when what you really want is a response.

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To improve it: 1) Make it about them 100%. No sales prospect cares about who you are or what you do. They care only about themselves and their company. So start with them. 2) Don't ask them to help you in any way, you are only there to help them do what they want to do. 3) You have to learn to qualify and make it apparent you've done your homework.