Hey, I have some thoughts for you:
- it's a bit cluttered. People don't have time to read through all the stuff to understand what the page is about. I'd make it simpler with a couple of graphics.
- If your goal is to sign up customers, you should highlight the feature and put it in the center. Also, what's the incentive for people to sign up? Give them something to be excited about.
- How long will they have to wait and what do they get after that?
- The box on the right side is a left unexplained. Might need some context or get rid of it.
- Yesterday I found a threat here for people to promote their beta launches. You might want to check it out :)
Best of luck