Ask HN: Feedback request for virtual pre-accelerator splashpage

I'm about to launch a virtual mentorship project with a local startup incubator. This project is based on the standard pre-accelerator approach, but it is hosted online through my startup's business model collaboration tool.

(https://www.startupsoap.co/) *Stripe disabled and ads not running yet.

I'm a new developer and this is my first splash page (my technical co-founder is fully focused on our product).

I'd appreciate technical feedback, but I also want to make sure my message is clear, complete, compelling, and concise. Does the price seem fair and the offering strong?

Our startup needs this to work out because our cash flow has been suffering from a long sales cycle. If we can make this model work, we would start partnering with more startup accelerators and incubators so that they can monetize extra mentorship hours.