Will see if we can clarify re: your first point. Probably have to live with the caps but will ask about that too.
Thanks for the feedback.
Thanks for the feedback.
http://lu.is/blog/2012/08/19/a-quick-note-on-conspicuous-tex...
Bryan Garner, a noted expert on legal writing (and editor of Black's Law Dictionary), agrees:
> And the worst conventions in contracts?
> Caps for contract text that is required to be “conspicuous.” The 9th Circuit has rightly noted that “lawyers who think their caps-lock keys are instant ‘make conspicuous’ buttons are deluded.”
http://www.abajournal.com/magazine/article/4_vignettes_lead_...