Hey Floya, I'm writing this here hoping you'll see this comment. You're getting a lot of unjust responses in here. The commentors are reading your thesis with the eyes of a trained skeptic expecting peer reviewed, collaborative work that takes years of experience to produce. They're nitpicking flaws and mistakes
we all make when we first start researching.
Your thesis is in fact really impressive and very nicely written! Your conclusions and future work section is excellent. Really very well done. Congratulations on finishing it. I hope you don't let the irrationally negative feedback here dissuade you from continuing your work, you certainly have a bright future ahead of you.