To pick out three things:
> Mechanism holds that every aspect of the world can be represented as a simple hierarchical structure of entities. But, while useful in fields like mathematics and manufacturing, this idea is generally worthless, because most aspects of the world are too complex to be reduced to simple structures.
Without trying to manage complexity, it becomes impossible to build real systems.
> Software, the book argues, is a non-mechanistic phenomenon. So it is akin to language, not to manufactured objects.
Well, yes, to a degree. But if you arbitrarily change a word in a 1000 page book, the book will not fall apart. If you do the same in software, most likely it will stop working. This is because there is much less dependence between sentences in natural language and the dependence is redundantly spread over many pages.
> The software elites have turned software into a weapon, a means to dominate and control society.
Sounds like a conspiracy theory too me.
Judging from the description, I also think the book lacks perspective. It's what a software engineer might expect the world to be, if he lives under a rock. Most of the world is doing just fine, and is just somewhat affected by software here and there.