Amazing startup pitches (Loopt, Mint, Dropbox, etc) [videos]
jonbischke.com
jonbischke.com
There's absolutely nothing wrong with demoing the product as a first step to getting an investor's interest, but a lot of the 'pitch training' or 'how to pitch your startup' type posts, seminars, workshops etc focus on what an investor wants to hear. Which is also called a pitch. One of the most common mistakes to make during this type of pitch (based on my experience, er, making said mistake) is to talk way too much about the product and tech and not enough about how the investor is going to get rich and retire to the Bahamas if they invest in you. Of course this varies tremendously by investor. The "pitch" at a YC interview is not going to start off with "Well, our total available market is $25 billion, and...".
The reason I mention this is because the two types of pitch are just commonly confused. For example at FOWA London, there was a pitching session on stage where three companies did a product pitch to the audience (the session was called Launch! iirc) and the judges made comments as if it were an investor pitch, which was a little unfair on the companies. They all took it gracefully, though.
tl;dr - Pitch can mean more than one thing. Know your audience (and judges if necessary)!
One thing that got me about a lot of the others, they just didn't feel practiced. If they were, it was not enough. Practice, practice and practice some more and when you think you've nailed it ... do it again ... twice. :)
What was really successful about his pitch though was his tone. He is VERY believable. He comes off as so true. Add to that the fact that he told us that we was only going to cover three things and then nailed them, and man, that's a nice pitch.
EDIT: I'm not trying to troll here, I'm serious -- do you think comments like this add something to a discussion?
New users are explicitly told such comments are ok: http://ycombinator.com/newswelcome.html
For another example of that see here:
http://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=941568
So I was a bit quick on the trigger there. On the other hand, if I would have been able to undo my vote (reddit style) I would have done so.
edit: it seems quite arbitrary to single these out for being modded down, there are much better examples of good contributions that got dumped on.
The link I posted above I would say is definitely a spammer+sock puppet or at least an acquaintance of a spammer.