Your title is fine, SwellJoe. I was being petty and pointing out a case where a descriptive title that didn't match the HTML <TITLE> dramatically improved the submission. I have long felt HN's title renaming policies were a bit too aggressive and I'd like to see 'em go away.

This wasn't the right venue for me to bring that up though - things have improved a good bit under dang's tenure already.

As a reference for my outdated and inappropriate axe grinding see this 2013 thread: https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=5142851

Mea culpa.

Second that - what's wrong with the title? It's descriptive, neutral, factual.